Has some really nice layers,
Has some really nice layers, but feels crushed under the weight of repetition.
Really good start though, love the guitar and the pads.
What is this crap?
Stop posting this.
Horribly unoriginal, even by pop standards.
Nice piece, it took about 2 listens for it to grow on me but it finally did, would make great menu music or credit music. Needs to be fleshed out more though.
Yeah, it could be, but I kinda like the minimalism. ;)
Great little loop, love the melelodies, could use a bit better loop point, but the drums feel just a tad bit outside of the mix, you could try some Reverb or Delay to thicken them and bring them a bit less out of the clean type of feel.
I agree with you about the loop point. It was so short, I just wanted to get it up here, and it was already in loop format except for the harp on the end, so I just removed that and submitted for feedback. :P
I will try messing with the drums a bit. To be honest, this song was pretty much made for the tune, and the drums were an afterthought. :P Thanks for the constructive criticism! :D
Nice layering but aside fomr that, it lacks originality.
Nice arp though.
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